Update 05-Shared_computing_etiquette.Rmd

Author: carriewright11

05-Shared_computing_etiquette.Rmd

@@ -102,7 +102,7 @@ Specifically, the etiquette regarding memory allocation includes:
 
 If you have a really large job that you need to perform, talk with the managers of the resource so that you can work out a time when perhaps fewer users would be inconvenienced. Consult the guidelines for your particular resource about how one lets people know about large jobs before you email the administrators of the resource directly. Often there are communications systems in place for users to let each other know about large jobs.
 
-The illustration below depicts how timing can affect the user experience in using a shared resource. If many people are using the same resource at the same time, especially using up the resources with a heavy task, it might slow down other users, or hinder them from performing their jobs fully. It might be a good idea to target a timeframe when you know might be less crowded.
+The illustration below depicts how timing can affect the user experience in using a shared resource. If many people are using the same resource at the same time, especially using up the resources with a heavy task, it might slow down other users, or hinder them from performing their jobs fully. It might be a good idea to target a timeframe when you know the resource will likely be less crowded.
 
 ```{r, fig.align='center', echo = FALSE, fig.alt= "This diagram depicts how efficiency or job speed can differ according to how many people are using the resource, and according to which jobs are being run using the resource. If you need to run a task that needs computing power, it might be a good idea to use a time when you know fewer people will be using the resource at the same time.", out.width="100%"}
 ottrpal::include_slide("https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1B4LwuvgA6aUopOHEAbES1Agjy7Ex2IpVAoUIoBFbsq0/edit#slide=id.g11bbe6ab7c6_0_4")