[#1973] Minor improvements to OSA content #1974
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Relevant issue(s)
#1973
What does this do?
This corrects a typo (
CESA
should beCSEA
), and makes some slight changes to the copy, so that it flows a bit better. It also spells outCSEA
, and references Ofcom with their common name.Why was this needed?
The copy was good, but it did not flow very well on user's screens, so it looked a bit like a wall of text (within one!), and there were a couple of typos (ref #1973 (review)).
Additionally, we referred to Ofcom as "Office of Communications" - we should try and avoid
govspeak
here, and use the more common name.Implementation notes
Nothing to note.
Screenshots
Notes to reviewer
The HTML on
removing_information.html.erb
is not consistently formatted. I've reformatted the bits in play here, but you might want to look at it more generally.