Address CNRI feedback

Author: palemieux

draft-lemieux-doi-uri-scheme-00.xml

@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ category="info" ipr="trust200902" xml:lang="en" version="3">
       <t>A DOI name is a global unique identifier of a referent, which can be
       any digital, physical or abstract entity, including inventions, literary
       and artistic works, ideas, symbols, names, images, designs, etc. DOI names
-      are, for example, widely used to identify academics publications. The DOI
+      are, for example, widely used to identify academic publications. The DOI
       system is specified in <xref target="iso26324"/> and <xref
       target="doi-handbook"/>, with the former offering regular formal snapshot
       of the latter.</t>
@@ -66,8 +66,9 @@ category="info" ipr="trust200902" xml:lang="en" version="3">
       address (or URL for Unified Resource Locator) representing an instance of
       the referent, and may contain services such as email, and one or more
       items of data about the referent (metadata). The DOI name resolution
-      process uses the Handle System specified at <xref
-      target="RFC3650"></xref>.</t>
+      process uses the Handle System specified at <xref target="RFC3650"/>,
+      <xref target="RFC3651"/> and <xref target="RFC3652"/>, as updated by <xref
+      target="DOI-RP"/>.</t>
 
       <t>This document specifies a URI scheme for DOI names. This scheme
       formalizes the notation "doi:&lt;DOI name&gt;", which is in
@@ -130,6 +131,11 @@ category="info" ipr="trust200902" xml:lang="en" version="3">
 
       <t>NOTE 3: DOI names are case-insensitive only when testing for
       equivalence and only with respect to the Basic Latin Unicode block.</t>
+
+      <aside><t>EDITOR'S NOTE: Does DOIF wish to recommend that DOI name only
+      contain code points from the Basic Latin block, to avoid the ambiguity
+      listed above? Such constraints should be made in the DOI Handbook and
+      ultimately in ISO 26324.</t></aside>
     </section>
 
     <section>
@@ -265,6 +271,7 @@ category="info" ipr="trust200902" xml:lang="en" version="3">
         <name>Informative References</name>
         <xi:include href="https://www.rfc-editor.org/refs/bibxml/reference.RFC.7595.xml"/>
         <xi:include href="https://bib.ietf.org/public/rfc/bibxml/reference.RFC.3650.xml"/>
+        <xi:include href="https://bib.ietf.org/public/rfc/bibxml/reference.RFC.3652.xml"/>
         <reference anchor="doi-handbook" target="https://www.doi.org/the-identifier/resources/handbook/">
           <front>
             <title>DOI Handbook</title>
@@ -274,6 +281,14 @@ category="info" ipr="trust200902" xml:lang="en" version="3">
           </front>
           <seriesInfo name="DOI" value="10.1000/182"/>
         </reference>
+        <reference anchor="DOI-RP" target="https://www.dona.net/sites/default/files/2022-06/DO-IRPV3.0--2022-06-30.pdf">
+          <front>
+            <title>Digital Object Identifier Resolution Protocol Specification</title>
+            <author>
+              <organization>DONA Foundation</organization>
+            </author>
+          </front>
+        </reference>
       </references>
     </references>